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Re: Like a Button: Parts 1 & 2
Hi lakegirls! I'm here to take a look at this second half. It's an all right second half. While it is put together rather well, it feels like it is ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: Viva La Vida
I sweep the dust away from the steps of the temple, the temple that once was mine. Here my glory was worshipped by many people from a myriad of lands. ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: Submerged
Hi Angel! It's been a while since I've seen anything new by you! I'm eager to get into this. :) So, despite the brevity and the rather limited scope of ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Like a Button: Parts 1 & 2
Hi lakegirls! I always like reading your stories. They're so delightful. :) And this story, it seems, is no exception. I like the three characters that you have here and ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Un-named
Hi bueberry! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'm dropping in to give you some help with this story! :) This is a well put together little piece of work. I see ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Till' Death Do Us Part..
Hi georgia30! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'm dropping in to give you a hand with this piece. The rain pooled in the cracks between the uneven cobblestones... like tears the ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Blessings [Prologue]
Hi Lil_Pau! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'm dropping in to give you a little hand with this prologue. As a prologue, I believe that this works very well. I found ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Pruit Igoe and Prophecies
The electronic banks of my brain reach on for miles in this place. The dust has gathered, yet my diodes still blink true, marking the passage of the moments one ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Nano Mix for Conrad Rice
I do love this! All these songs are so wonderful. :)
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (8)
Here I am Kylan, with my review of part 8! :) I didn't see anything remarkable about the first part of this. Unless this character and his guilt are going ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (7)
Hi Ky! I just got back from vacation, so I decided to do this before I forgot. :P This was a good section here. I'm afraid I had a peek ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: The Engine
The rain poured down from the blackest of night skies. A thin man, with only an umbrella for protection, rushed through the deluge; splashing puddles as he hurried. The dark ...
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Eden looked at Slim. He didn't trust him much, at all. Though this wasn't really a new thing. Eden didn't trust much of anyone he came across. He tolerated Aislara ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (6)
Well, Kylan, I have to say that this was an interesting portion and that I liked it. The first section with the Pastor was rather well done. I thought that ...
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Note on the Chat
Awesome Nate. That'll be great. :)
Mar 9, 2009
